徐州专版2020中考英语复习方案第一篇教材考点梳理话题写作03降生活课件 24页

话题写作 （三） 健康生活 第一篇　教材考点梳理 【 话题点睛 】 针对的话题主要是体育锻炼和健康饮食。 体育锻炼主要涉及 : 开展体育锻炼的方式 ; 鼓励多进行体育运动 , 强身健体等。 健康饮食主要涉及 : 远离垃圾食品 , 健康饮食的好处及具体做法等。 【 参考谚语 】 1.All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy. 只工作 , 不玩耍 , 聪明孩子也变傻。 2.The first wealth is health. 健康是人生第一财富。 3.An apple a day keeps the doctor away. 一天一苹果 , 医生远离我。 常用表达 【 相关短语 】 say no to junk food 拒绝垃圾食品 ; get away from junk food 远离垃圾食品 ; keep a healthy lifestyle 保持健康的生活方式 ; make us stronger and stronger 使我们越来越强壮 ; take an active part in PE 积极上体育课 ; develop good habits 养成良好的习惯 ; stay up too late 熬夜到很晚 【 亮点句型 】 体育锻炼 1. In the school, I take an active part in PE. 2. I like sports, which makes me healthy, strong and full of energy. 3. We should develop good habits and correct bad ones in our life. 4. We'd better not spend too much time going online. 5. They can easily be short-sighted after playing computer games for a long time. 饮食健康 1. As far as I am concerned, we should say no to junk food. 2. There is no doubt that junk food is made delicious to attract us. 3. To keep a healthy lifestyle, we should get away from junk food. 4. Take more fruit and vegetables which can provide the nutrition we need. 5. In a word, a balanced diet can help make us stronger and healthier. Ⅰ. 根据汉语意思完成句子。 1. 健康的饮食能够使我们越来越强壮。 A healthy diet can help make us 　　　　　　　　　　　　 .  2. 为了保持健康的生活方式 , 我们应该远离垃圾食品。 To keep a healthy lifestyle, we should 　　　　　　　　 junk food.  3. 我总是早早上床睡觉 , 并且早起读英语书。 I always 　　　　　　　　　　　　 and 　　　　　　 early to read English books.  基础写作 stronger and stronger get away from go to bed early get up 4. 我们应该每天保持大约八小时的睡眠 , 并且学会放松。 We should 　　　　 about 　　　　　　　　 sleep every day and learn to relax. keep Eight hours’ Ⅱ. 用括号内所给提示将下列句子译成英语。 1. 垃圾食品对我们的健康有害。 (do harm to) 2. 学生们都积极上体育课。 (take part in) 3. 作为中学生 , 我们应该有健康的生活方式。 (a healthy lifestyle) 4. 李强经常在学校运动会得一等奖。 (get the first prize) Junk food does harm to our health. The students all take an active part in PE. As middle school students, we should have a healthy lifestyle. Li Qiang often gets the first prize in the school sports meeting. 5. 我们应该保持均衡的饮食。 (a balanced diet) 　 “民以食为天” , 饮食的安全和健康受到越来越多的关注和重视。请你以“ Say No to Junk Food ”为题 , 根据以下要点写一篇英语短文。 典例分析 We should keep a balanced diet. [ 写作要点 ] (1) 垃圾食品尽管美味 , 但对健康无益 , 而且其过多的包装会产生更多的垃圾 ; (2) 远离垃圾食品 , 还应选择正确的生活方式 , 如 :① 三餐要有规律 , 少吃零食、快餐 ;② 多吃蔬菜、水果等健康食物 , 以提供身体必需营养 ;③ 多参加户外活动…… [ 写作要求 ] (1) 词数 :80 左右 , 开头与结尾已给出 , 不计入总词数 ; (2) 内容必须包括上述所有要点 , 可适当进行发挥。 [ 参考词汇 ] 过多包装 over packaging; 有规律地 regularly; 营养 nutrition Say No to Junk Food Nowadays, more and more attention has been paid to food safety and health. As far as I am concerned, we should say no to junk food . In a word, a healthy diet with less junk food can help make us stronger and stronger. 【 思路点拨 】 1. 要点提炼 : 主题是号召大家健康饮食 , 少吃垃圾食品。写作内容可以从以下几方面展开 : (1) 垃圾食品虽美味 , 但既不健康 , 又不环保 ; (2) 倡导健康的生活方式 , 如按时吃三餐 , 多吃水果、蔬菜 , 多做户外运动等 ; (3) 总结概括健康的生活方式给我们带来的好处。 2. 确定时态 : 一般现在时 3. 确定人称 : 第一人称 / 第二人称 【 写作架构 】 【 佳作欣赏 】 Say No to Junk Food Nowadays, more and more attention has been paid to food safety and health. As far as I am concerned, we should say no to junk food. There is no doubt that junk food is made delicious and attractive, but it surely does harm to our health. Meanwhile, the over packaging leads to much more rubbish. To get away from junk food, we should focus on how to keep a healthy lifestyle. There are many tips to follow. First, eat regularly — three meals a day on time. Try as few snacks and fast food as possible. Second, have more fruit and vegetables which can provide the nutrition we need. What's more, do more outdoor activities. As long as you are busy with something interesting, you will more probably get away from junk food. In a word, a healthy diet with less junk food can help make us stronger and stronger. 【 名师点评 】 1. 从垃圾食品的特点谈起 , 美味但不健康 , 进而过渡到主题 : 远离垃圾食品。 2. 正文部分从三个方面进行论证 , 结合了参考词汇 , 并适当拓展。 3. 句式多样化 , 并巧妙运用连词。 There is no doubt that …句型、同位语从句、不定式作目的状语、 which 引导的定语从句、 as long as 引导的条件状语从句等使文章生动。 meanwhile, first, second, what's more, in a word 这些连词 ( 短语 ) 使文章衔接自然。 实战演练 A 　　 积极锻炼是非常重要的 , 为此 , 某英文报开展了一次有关初中生锻炼情况的调查活动。请你根据下列图表和相关文字提示 , 以“ Exercising is important! ”为题 , 用英文写一篇短文。 要点 具体内容 调 查数 据 每天锻炼的时间 不经常锻炼的原因 锻 炼的意义 有益于身体健康 ; 保持思维敏锐 ; 变得自信快乐 你 的建 议 就如何更好地开展锻炼 , 提出你的建议 ( 至少两点 ) [ 注意 ] (1) 短文应包括所给内容要点 , 可适当发挥 , 使文章连贯 ; (2) 词数 :90 左右 , 短文开头已给出 , 不计入总词数 ; (3) 短文中不得提及考生所在学校及自己的姓名等信息。 [ 参考词汇 ] 敏锐的 sharp Exercising is important! Recently, we have done a survey about students' exercising. According to the survey, 32% of the students spend over one hour every day doing exercise, while 68% of them spend less than one hour. The reasons are as follows: Firstly, 46% of them have too much homework, so they have no time to do exercise. Secondly, 29% of them are not good at exercise. Thirdly, 25% of them are not interested in it. As we all know, exercising is good for our health, which keeps our minds sharp and makes us confident and happy. In my opinion, we should keep a balance between our study and exercising. Besides, we should develop a good habit of doing exercise. B [2019 ·宿迁一模 ] 青少年饮食是影响人口素质的重要因素 , 但目前部分青少年的饮食状况令人担忧。请你根据下表提供的信息 , 写一篇以“ Teenagers Need Healthy Diet ”为题的英语短文 , 供英语课上交流。 [ 注意 ] (1) 短文必须包含所给信息 , 并适当发挥 , 不要简单翻译 ; (2) 词数 90 词左右。开头已给出 , 不计入总词数。 现状 零食不断、饿肚上学、拒绝果蔬…… 建议 健康饮食、三餐规律…… Teenagers Need Healthy Diet 　　 Healthy diet is very important to us teenagers. However, many teenagers do not have a healthy diet. They often eat snacks between meals. Some of them even go to school without breakfast. Moreover, they seldom eat fruit and vegetables. They prefer meat and fried food. As a result, lots of them are overweight. To make ourselves healthy, we teenagers should have a healthy eating habit. First of all, we must have breakfast because it gives us energy for the whole morning. And we'd better eat more fruit and vegetables. Remember, an apple a day keeps the doctor away. We can have more fish instead of meat. Besides, we should have our meals on time.