高考英语Writing 23页

Howtowriteagoodcomposition(I)写不好英语作文的原因：1.缺乏词汇和句型等基本语言知识2.没有掌握英语书面表达的技能\n组织结构Organization$5内容Content$10语言Language$10Agoodcomposition=$25评分标准\n内容：观点明确，内容充实，理由充分语言：表达正确，语言流畅，用词恰当，句式多样化结构：结构正确，上下文连贯一致\nIntroductionMainbodyConclusion基本结构基本结构\n以朋友为主题写一篇作文。该文必须包含下列内容：1.你生活中所看到或所经历的一段交友故事。2.该故事对你产生的影响及你的想法。\nHead:IntroductionParagraphWriteoneortwosentencestoexplainthebackgroundofthetopicandwritethetopicsentence.GoodBeginning\nHowtomakeagoodbeginning警醒法：用令人感到惊奇的句子开头，激起读者的关注。引用法：摘录或引用名人名言、谚语等作为文章的开头。Aproverbgoesthat“Alifewithoutafriendisalifewithoutasun.”3.问题法：用提出一个观点或论据作为文章要阐明和论述的主题，以引起读者的关注。Whatmakesatruefriend?4.背景法：说明事件发生的时间、地点、情景和背景。5.数据法：利用已经被证实的数字来引起话题。\nAcompletesentenceneithertoowidenortoonarrow.Atopicsentenceshouldbe:\nFriendsplayaveryimportantroleinourlife.Makingfriendsisnotalwayseasyandmaintainingfriendshipisfarmoredifficult.Everyoneneedsfriendsbutnotallofourfriendsareworthgettingonwellwith.HereIwanttosharemyexperiencewithyou.\n4.Whatdoes“friendship”mean?Maybedifferentpeoplehavedifferentideas.Thereisnodefiniteanswertothisquestion.\nBody:SupportingDetailsexamplesfactsdetailedreasonscauseandeffectdataexamplesfactsBrainstormingopinions\nFrommypointofview,afriendshouldbethepersonwhocouldstrikeachordwithmeandalwayspointoutmymistakesinatenderway.Lilyisanauthenticfriendinaccordancewithmydifinition.WhenIwasinmyjuniorschoolperiod,Iwasabad-temperedgirl,whoalwayshadanargumentwithherparents.However,itisLilywhowaspatientenoughtopersuademeoutofcontinuingthiskindoflifethatalteredmylifestyle.Sowecansafelydrawtheconclusionthatagoodfriendcouldchangeyourlife-longpath.\nFrommyexperience,Ilearnedthateverybodyshouldtreathisfriendswithemapthyandsincerity,thusreapinganharmorniousfamilyratherthanacoldplacesatruatedwithselfishconcepts.Byandlarge,itishightimethatwemadeeveryefforttocareforandloveourfriendswithawarmheart.\nTail:concludingparagraphAgoodconcludingparagraphshouldbeshortbutstrong,repeatingyouropinioninafreshwayandgivingyourexpectationsandhopesforthefutureordetermination.\nTail:concludingparagraph总结法：以一句有特点的句子（诸如虚拟语气）来收口，起到画龙点睛的作用。SincesheissuchawonderfulfriendthatIwishwewouldneverpart.引语法：用名人名言、格言、谚语或习语等结尾，意味深长，耐人寻味。Inaword,friendshipmultipliesjoysanddividesgrieves.3.反诘法：用疑问句形式结尾，具有很明显的强调作用，能引起读者的思考。Aren'tgoodfriendsbeneficialtoeachother?\n多用高级词汇，长短句式互补举例1.用较高级词汇替换划线词:1)AlltheforeignguestsweresurprisedatthebeautifulbuildingsinPudongnewarea.2)Thisquestionhascausedmanypeople’sattention.amazedmaganificent,splendid,grandThisissuehascausedwidepublicconcern.\n3)Usingbicyclegreatlyimprovespeople’shealthaswellaseasingtrafficjams.Usingbicyclecontributesgreatlytopeople'sphysicalfitnessaswellaseasingtrafficjams.4)Weshouldtryourbesttoovercomethedifficulties．Weshouldsparenoeffort/endeavour/strivetoconquerthedifficulties．\n5)Therewereabout200hundredpeopletakingpartinthewritingcontest.6)Moreandmorepeoplearebeginningtounderstandthateducationisnotcompletewithgraduation.approximatelyparticipatingin/enteringforAnincreasing/growing/significent/greatnumberofpeoplerealize\n7)Therehasbeenmuchincreaseintheworldpopulationinthelastdecades.8)I’mgoingtothatbigsupermarkettobuysomehouseholdappliances.9)Onmywayhome,Ioftenwalkintotheshoptogetsomebreaddramatic/drasticgrandpurchasepopinto\n10)Thosewhobreaktrafficrulesshouldbepunished.Thosewhoviolatetrafficregulationsdeservedpunishing/punishment/tobepunished.11)Sincetheexaminationiscomingnear,Ihavetogiveupdoingsports.Sincetheexaminationisaroundthecorner/approaching/drawingnear，Iamcompelledtogiveupdoingsports.\n12)Itisknownaroundtheworldthattreesarenecessarytous.Itisuniversallyacknowledgedthattreesareindispensabletous.全世界都知道树木对我们是不可或缺的。\nSomemoretipsonwriting:AboutthetitleAboutparagraphsAbouthandwriting\nHomework高三同学刻苦努力学习为了进入大学深造，他们心目中想必都有一个理想的大学。请你谈谈你的理想中的大学是什么样子的。