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【2013?课标全国卷Ⅰ】书面表达(满分25分)假定你是李华。请你给笔友Peter写封信，告诉他你叔叔李明将去他所在城市开会，带去他想要的那幅中国画，同时询问他是否可以接机。信中还需说明：李明：高个子，戴眼镜航班号：CA985到达：8月6日上午11:30注意：1.词数100左右2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.开头语和介绍语已为你写好。DearPeter,Howareyoudoing?___________________________________________________________________________________________________Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiHua【参考范文】DearPeter,Howareyoudoing?I’mwritingtotellyouthatmyuncleLiMingisgoingtoyourcityforaconference,andI’veaskedhimtobringyoutheChinesepaintingyou’veaskedforbefore.Also,I’dlikeyoutodomeafavor.WouldyoupleasemeetmyuncleattheairportandtakehimtohishotelsincethisisthefirstvisittotheU.S.?Thankyouinadvance!HisflightnumberisCA985,anditwillarriveat11:30am.August6.Myuncleistallandheiswearingglasses.Andhewillbeinbluejacket.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiHua\n【2013年高考陕西卷】书面表达（满分30分）假定你是李华。请根据写作要点用英语写一篇周记，记述你周末帮助家人做家务的一次经历。写作要点：1.做家务的理由；2.做家务的过程；3.你的感受。注意：1.短文词数不少于100；2.开头部分已写好，不计入总词数；3.不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。Iaman18-year-oldmiddleschoolstudent,【参考范文】I’man18-yearoldmiddleschoolstudent.Ihavebeenbusywithmystudyandseldomhelpedmyparentswiththehousework.Feelingquitesorryforthat,Ibegintothinkaboutwhattodotohelp.LastSunday,whenmyparentswentoutshopping,Isuddenlygotanidea:whynotgivetheroomsathoroughcleaning?FirstlyIcollectedallthebooks,newspapersandotherthingsscatteredintheroomsandputtheminplace.ThenIwipedthedustoffallthefurniture.Afterthat,Isweptandmoppedthefloors.       Atthisverymoment,myparentscamebackandwerequitesurprisedtoseealltheroomstidyandfloorsshining.MymothergavemeahugandIcouldseesatisfactioninhereyes.TiredasIwas,Ineverfeltsohappy.\n【2013·辽宁卷】书面表达（满分25分）—个英文网站面向中学生征稿请你写一篇英语稿件，介绍“中秋节”及这个节日里的主要活动。1.      写作要点：它是中国的传统节日之一；2.      家人团聚；3.      赏月、吃月饼；4.      还有旅游、访友等其他活动。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.开头语已为你写好，不计人总词数。参考词汇：中秋节theMid-AutumnFestival农历lunarcalendar赏月enjoythefullmoon月饼mooncakeTheMid-AutumnFestivalTheMid-AutumnFestivalfallsonthe15thoftheeighthmonthofourChineselunarcalendar.AsoneofthetraditionalChinesefestivals,ithasbeenenjoyinggreatpopularityinourcountry.Usually,nomatterhowfarawayorhowbusyweare,wewilltrytocomehomeforthecelebration.Themoonthatnightlooksthebrightestinthewholelunarmonth.Whatwelovemostisthetimeweenjoythefullmoontogether.Withthebeautifulmoonupinthesky,wesittogetherandeatmooncakesandfruit,sharingourstories.Inadditiontothesetraditionalactivities,wehaveawiderrangeofchoicessuchastravellingandvisitingourrelativesorfriends.\n【2013·福建卷】书面表达(满分25分）孩子的成长和教育是社会热议的话题，现今父母包揽一切、孩子过度依赖等现象十分严重。请阅读下面的漫画，按要求用英文写一篇短文。内容要求：1.描述漫画内容；2.分析漫画所揭示的问题；3.提出你的看法。注意：1.短文开头已给出，不计入总词数；2.考生可适当发挥，使文章内容充实、连贯；3.词数120左右;4.文中不能出现考生的具体信息。参考词汇:pavethewayFromthepicture,wecanseeafamilyofthreewalkingonalongredcarpet._______________________________Onepossibleversion:Fromthepicturewecanseeafamilyofthreewalkingonalongredcarpet.Theson,welldressed,wavesproudlyinthemiddlewhilethefatherbehindbendsforwardtoholdthejacketandthemotherinfrontrollsoutthecarpet,sweating.Itshowsacommonphenomenonnowadaysthatchildrenarethefocusoffamilies,shoulderingthehopeoftheirparents.Parentsarrange\neverythingfortheirchildrenandsparenoefforttopavethewayfortheirsuccess.Asaconsequence,childrenbecomesoreliantontheirparentsthattheyhavenoindependentthoughtorcreativeideas.Suchasituationisofgreatconcern.Inmyopinion,overprotectionandtoomuchcareareextremelybadforchildren’sdevelopment.Insteadofdoingeverythingforthem,parentsshouldencouragetheirchildrentoovercomedifficultiesandinspirethemtodevelopbythemselves.Onlyinthiswaycantheygrowuptobeindependentandbecometrulysuccessful.\n【2013·安徽卷】书面表达（满分25分）假设你校英语社团举办以“讲求文明，从我做起”为主题的征文活动，请你以“OntheWaytoSchool”为题，写一篇英语短文。内容主要包括：1.遵守交通法规；2.注意举止文明。注意：1.词数120左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.短文中不能出现与本人相关的信息；4.短文的题目已为你拟好，不计入总词数Onepossibleversion:Thesedays,breakingtrafficrulesandlitteringarenotuncommon,causingseriousharmtolifeandtheenvironment.Changingthissituationrequiresconsiderableeffortonthepartofeveryone.Asforme,itshouldstartonthewaytoschool.Iwillkeeptrafficrulesinmindalltheway.IfIrideabicycle,I’llalwayskeeptotherightandnevercrossaroaduntilthetrafficlightturnsgreen.IfIwalk,I’llneverforgettousethepedestriancrossing.Meanwhile,I’llregarditasmydutytohelpkeepourenvironmentcleanandhealthy.NotonlywillIkeepfromlitteringandspittinganywhere,Iwillalsohelpcleanuptheroadsidelitterwheneverpossible.Ihopemybehaviorwillmakeadifference.\n【2013·北京卷】书面表达（共两节，15分）第一节情景作文（20分）假设你是红星中学高三（1）班的学生李华，请按照以下四幅图的先后顺序，用英文写一篇周记。记述爸爸出差期间，妈妈生病，你照顾她的过程。注意：1.周记的开头已经为你写好。2.词数不少于60.LastMonday,【参考范文】1LastMonday,myfathersaidgoodbyetomymotherandmeandwentonabusinesstrip.Hewouldbeawayforthreedays.JustthenextmorningIfoundmymotherwasn’tfeelingwell.Shehadacold.Iimmediatelywenttogethersomemedicineandthenpreparedsomenoodlesforher.Withmyspecialcare,mymotherrecoveredquickly.Whenmyfathercamebackhome,mymothertoldhimwhathadhappened.HepraisedmeforwhatIhaddone.IfeelveryhappythatIhavedonesomethingformymother.【参考范文】2LastMonday,myfatherwouldbeonabusinesstripforfivedays.Havinggottenmypromiseofbeinggreatathomeandtakingcareofmymother,herestassuredandputhisluggageintothetrunkofhiscar.Seeingmyfather’sdrivingaway,mymotherandIwavedourhandsandsaidgoodbyetohim.Foramoment,Ibegantomissmyfather,wishingthathewouldbesafeandwellthenextdays.\nIthoughteverythingwouldgowell,asthiswasnotthefirsttimethatmyfatherhadbeenawayforseveraldays.Yet,unfortunately,mymothercaughtacoldthenextmorning.Lookingatherpaleface,Iexperiencedhighlevelsofanxiety.However,ItoldmyselfthatIhadtocalmdownandlookaftermymum,asIpromisedtomydad.ThemomentIgotmymumtosleep,Iputcoldtowelonherforehead,foundpillsinthemedicinebox,andmadesomenoodlesforher.Luckily,shewakedupandfeltbetter,aftertakingthepillsandthenoodles.Thatherfeverwasgonerelievedandsatisfiedmealot.Inthenextfourdays,Iwastakingherbodytemperaturetwiceaday,ensuringthatshewascompletelywell.Toourdelight,mydadwentbackhomesafelyandhealthilyonSaturday.OnhearingwhatIhaddonetomymum,he,aswellasmymum,beamedatmeandgavemeabigthumb.Hearingtheirpraisesandseeingbrightsmilesontheirfaces,Ireallyfeltoverjoyedandthrilled.Conceivably,takingcareofmyparentswas,indeedanddefinitely,mymissionandobligation.\n【2013·重庆卷】写作（共两个写作任务，满分35分）写作一（满分15分）请结合材料，按要求用英文写作。Amothersaid,“Mysonisalwaysonthephone,sleeping,outwithfriends,orinhisroom.Heneverhastimetotalktome.”【参考范文】ImustsaythatIhavebeenbehavingthiswaytosomedegree.ThoughIknowMumisthemostimportantpersoninmyworld,Ijustcannotdowhatshelikesmetodo.ItseemsthatIquiteoftenstayawayfrommydearmuminplayingmyphone,sleeping,hangingoutwithmyfriend,orjustshuttingoutmymuminmyroom.Havingreadabouttheabovecommoncomplaintfromsomanymothers,Ifeelashamedandguilty.Fromnowon,Ishalltrymybesttostaywithmydearparentsasoftenaspossible.Imustconfessweyounggenerationmustrealizethatourparentscareforusaswellashopingtosharewhatwehavebeendoingwiththem.\n【2013·山东卷】写作（满分30分）假如你是新华中学的学生李华，你的美国朋友Tom一周前给你发电子邮件，询问你暑假里的打算，但你因准备期末考试未能及时回复。请根据双下要点给他回封邮件：1.      未及时回信的原因；2.      你假期的打算（如做兼职、旅行、做志愿者等）注意：1.词数：120-150；2可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。【参考范文】DearTom,    Howareyoudoing? Youaskedmeinyourlastletteraboutmyplanforthecomingsummervacation.IamsorrythatIdidn’treplywithoutdelay. HowIwishIwouldreadandreplyyouremailassoonasIreceivedit.However,Iwasbusypreparingformyfinalexamatthattime,whichisvitalforme.Asaresult,Ihadnochoicebuttocompletelyfocusonmystudy,forwhichIamverysorry.Ihopeyoucanunderstandme.Duringtheholiday,Iamgoingtodoapart-timejob.Ontheonehand,Icanearnsomemoneytoreducetheburdenofmyfamily.Ontheotherhand,Iaccumulatethesocialexperience,whichdoesgoodtomyfuturelife.Atthesametime,Iwillnotforgettogoovermylesson.Iwillspendainstructiveholiday.Howwillyouspendyourholiday?Ihopeyouhaveagoodtime.Thesearemyplanforthesummervacation.What’syours?Iamlookingforwardtoyourearliestreply.Yours,LinHua\n【2013·四川卷】书面表达（共35分）某中学生英文报近期开辟专栏，讨论学习习惯问题，请你结合自身学习实际，按一下提示，用英文为该专栏写一篇稿件。1.      说明学习习惯与学习效果之间的关系；2.      介绍一种好的学习习惯并提出养成该习惯的建议；3.      描述自己在学习习惯方面存在的某个问题并给出改进措施注意：1.      词数120左右，开头语已为你写好2.      可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯3.      文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称It’susefulandnecessarytodiscusslearninghabits.【参考范文】It’susefulandnecessarytodiscusslearninghabits.Asweallknow,goodlearninghabitscanmakeyourstudygotosucceed.Asastudent,weshouldpaymoreattentionstoourhabitswhichwedevelopinourstudy.I’msure“repeat”isabesthabit.Doyoudevelopthehabit?Ifwewanttoimproveourstudy,weshouldrepeatwhattheteacherstaughtusagainandagain,andthenwecanunderstandorremembertheknowledgewhichtheteachersdemandustomaster.Howtodevelopthehabit?thefirststep,setatimetable,andsticktocarryouttheplan,don’tstop.WhenIdomyhomework,Ioftenmakemistakeswithcarelessness,howtoovercometheshortage?IthinkIshouldthinkaboutitoverandoveraslongasIdomyhomework.AndthenIdoitlittlebylittle.MaybeinthiswayIcancorrectmymistakes.\n【2013·江西卷】书面表达（满分25分）星光中学（XingguangHighSchool）近期举行了一次登山活动。假定你是学校英语报记者，请写一篇短文，报道此次活动。内容包括：1.时间与地点：4月10日，大青山（DaqingMountain）；2.活动的过程；3.你对于这次活动的评论。注意：1.词数120左右。2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。【参考范文】Inordertoencouragethestudentstotakeoutdoorexercise,ourschoolorganizedamountain-climbingonApril10.Hundredsofustookpartinit.Itwasaniceday.At8:00am,wegatheredatthefootofDaqingMoutainandsetoutforthetopinhighspirits.Allthewaywewerechatting,singingandlaughing,enjoyingthefreshairandthebeautifulscenery.Whensomefellbehind,otherswouldcomeandofferhelp.About2hourslater,weallreachedthetop.Bathedinsunshine,wejumpedandcheeredwithjoy.Theactivitybenefitedusalot.Notonlydiditgetusclosetonatureandgiveusrelaxationfromheavyschoolwork,italsopromotedthefriendshipamongus.Whatawonderfultime!\n【2013浙江卷】请以“OneThingI’mProudof”为题，用英语写一篇100---120个词的短文，记述一件你自己认为得意的事情。要求如下：1.记述事情的经过；2.简要说明你感到得意的原因或从中得到的启示。注意：文章的标题已给出，不计入词数。【参考范文】OneThingI’mProudofIstillrememberhowIbecameagoodtabletennisplayer.ThefirstdayIwenttohighschool,Isawsomeofmyclassmatesplayingtabletennis.Amazedathowskillfultheywere,Iwasdeterminedtobejustasgood.Lateron,Ioftenwatchedthemcarefullytolearntheirtechniques.ThenIkeptpracticinguntilIbecameconfidentenoughtochallengethegoodplayers.AttheendofthetermIbecameoneofthebestplayersinmyclass.Iamreallyproudofthisexperience,becauseithelpsmerealizethatweallcanfulfillourpotentialandachieveourgoalsthroughhardwork.Italsohelpsmebetterunderstandtheproverb"Practicemakesperfect.”II.GuidedWritingDirections:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgiveninChinese.上海博物馆拟举办一次名画展，现就展出场所（博物馆还是社区图书馆）征集公众意见，假设你是王敏，给上海博物馆写一封信表达你的想法。你的信必须满足以下要求：1.简述你写信的目的及你对场所的选择； 2.说明你的理由（从便利性，专业性等方面对这两个场所进行对比）Towhomitmayconcern:I’velearnedthatanartexhibitionistobeheldandthatyou’recollectingsuggestionsonitslocation.I’mwritingthislettertosharewithyoumyopinions.Inmyopinion,itismoreadvisabletoholdtheartexhibitioninShanghaiMuseumthanincommunitylibraries.Myreasonsareasfollows.\nOnonehand,itismoreconvenientforpeopletogettoShanghaiMuseumwhichislocatedinthecenterofthecity.Andthemuseumismuchmorespaciousthancommunitylibraries,whichprovidesvisitorswithamorecomfortableenvironmentforappreciatingart.Ontheotherhand,asawell-knownmuseum,ShanghaiMuseumismoreprofessionalandexperiencedinholdingartexhibitions.Itsprofessionalsecurityguardsandadvancedfacilitiescanbetterprotectthosefamouspaintingsfrombeingdamagedorstolen.Therefore,Isuggesttheexhibitionbeheldinthemuseum.WangMin解析：总评：本次高考题目以书信的方式考查观点论述的表达，属于常见题型。题目要求中交待了背景，同时，题目还明确要求了书信的内容中要包括目的、观点、理由等方面，难度适中。细评：本次高考作文考查观点论述，题型较为常见，要求对画展的展出场所做出选择，并且说明理由，而且已经提示了可以从便利性和专业性两个角度来分析，难度不算太大，要写好这篇作文，只要观点明确并且言之有理即可。范文按照书信的形式，首先要提出给收信人，Towhomitmayconcern这里表示的是敬启者，是在读者身份不明时用在信件、通知和证明书开头的套语，也是除了Dearxxx之外英语书信的常见用语。信的第一段交待了自己的身份，并且表明了些这封信的目的。第二段明确提出了自己的观点，用了itismoreadvisabletodo...句型，表明“……是更合理的”，常用在提出建议时。段落最后用Myreasonsareasfollows.“我的理由如下”作为一个过渡句引出下面的理由论述。第三、四段用ononehand...ontheotherhand...“一方面……；另一方面……”进行连接，层次清楚。在论述观点时连词的使用可以使逻辑显得更清晰。第三段从便利性角度进行分析，博物馆交通更便利而且环境更舒适，其中用到了which引导的非限定性定语从句。第四段从专业性角度说明博物馆的优势。最后一段用therefore简单总结并重申自己的观点。