高考改错技巧 31页

改错技巧万宏\nTheStoryaboutGrowingPainsismyfavoriteAmericanTVplaybecauseitisveryinterested.Theplay76._______tellshumorousstoriesthathappenintheSeaver’s77.______family.Withsuchstoriesitmakepeoplethink78._______aboutlife,butthereforeattractstheaudience.Itis79._______alsoawindowwhichwecanlearnaboutAmerican80._________society.Andthereweremanymeaningfulthingsthat81.______areworththinkof,suchastherelationshipbetween82.______parentsandchildreninalotofAmericanfamily.It83.______isquitedifferentfromthoseinChina.Theplayis84._______verypopular.We’dbetternottomissthechance85._______toenjoyit.interestingmakesandarethinkingfamiliesthat∧tothefrom/through2008重庆卷2\n一、设错方式1）错词2）多词3）缺词4）正确更正删除补漏/////“1126”原则“1225”原则“1117”原则3\n二、改错格式短文改错（共10小题;每小题1分，满分10分）此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉,在该行右边横线上写出该词,并也用斜线划掉。此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。注意：原行没有错的不要改。4\nWeallhadagoodtimetoday.2.Icanreturntoschoolnow.3.Ilikeplayingpiano.4.Imajorataccounting.the∧into√5\n1.Gothroughthewholepassagetogetageneralidea.(浏览全文，掌握大意）2.Readthepassagesentencebysentenceandfindthemistakes.（分句阅读，逐行找错）3.Readthepassageforthethirdtime,checktheanswersandcorrectthedifficultones.（检查核对，攻克难点）三、改错步骤6\n如何做短文改错题从句子的角度分析：（1）查时态是否一致1、Theyofferedmecoffeeandotherdrinks,wehaveagoodtimetalkingandlaughing2、Myfavouritesportisfootball.Iwasamemberofourfootballteam.3、Irememberedherwordsandcalmdown.7\n（2）查主谓是否一致1、Anyonemayborrowbooksanditcostnothingto…2、Playingfootballnotonly…butalsogiveus…3、…clearupmysteries.Butthenthereisalwaysmoremysteriestolookinto…8\n（3）查指代是否一致1、Andtheymustnotbreaktherulestoooftenifwewanttowinthegame.2、Iusedtolovescienceclass---allofthem---3、IlikedthoseclassesbecauseIfeltthatithelpedme.9\n（4）查上下文修饰语是否一致1、TheywanttoknowaboutChinaandaskmealotofquestion.2、Westudyquiteafewsubject.3、Shesaidthatsheandmyclassmateall…4、I’llspendallthewholeweekendreadingandprepareforit.5、Itwasverykindforthemtomeetme.10\n5）查行文逻辑是否一致1、ItisaveryimportantexambutIcan’taffordtofailit.2、Mostpeoplecanquicklygetforhelpfromadoctororgotoahospitalsincetheyareill.3、Shewassmilingbutnoddingatme.Iremembered.11\n逐句找错，错在那里？动词形，名词数．还要注意形和副．代词格，细领悟介词短语须关注．习惯用法要记住．冠词连词常光顾．12\n此考点归纳的是除动词时态与非谓语动词之外的动词考点，它包括被动语态、情态动词、动词形式的变化、动词用法辨析、动词be的误加与漏用等。NMET2000：Nowmypictureandprizeishanginginthelibrary.＿＿＿＿NMET’2003：Shelikeditverymuchandreadsittotheclass.＿＿＿＿Ofcourse,whenmymotherwasasked,“Haveyou…”______are____————一、动词形readwas13\nHelieddownbythesideofthepathtorest.(lied改为lay，lie表示“躺”时，其过去时是lay)(全国卷)(2)CharlesandLindawereseeingnearthetopofthebuilding.(seeing改为seen，因为从含义上看，此处谓语应用被动语态)(全国卷)(3)Booksmaybekeepforfourweeks.(keep改为kept，因此处要用被动语态)(全国卷)14\n(11)Itwasverycold.Thesnowliedthickontheground.(12)TherewillhaveanEnglishfilmintheschoolhalltonight.(13)Afterthat,theboydecidednottoasailor.(14)Aftersupper,myfatherwouldgooutforawalkandthencomebacktoseenewspapers.(15)Heartomecarefully.WhatI’msayingisveryimportant.laybeberead15\n短文改错的名词考点主要涉及名词的单复数问题，即在该用复数的地方误用其单数，或在该用单数的地方误用其复数。NMET2001：…sothatI’llgetgoodmarksinallmysubject.＿＿＿＿NMET2003:Theirwordwereagreatencouragementtome._____subjectswords二、名词数16\n(1)Westoppedtorestforawhileandtodrinksomewatersfromastream.(全国卷)(2)Weclimbeverywhere,notonlyinAmerica.WehavebeentoEuropemanytime.(3)Therearebranchlibraryinmanyvillages.(4)Ihopethatyoutwocouldcomeandvisitussometimessoon.watertimeslibrariestime17\n短文改错对冠词的考查主要涉及冠词的误加和漏用，有时也考查不定冠词与定冠词以及零冠词的用法区别(包括a与an的区别)。其中，涉及最多的是，当一个单数可数名词表示泛指时，其前漏用不定冠词；另外，冠词在一些习语中的用法也是一个重要考点三、冠词连词常光顾Afterahourorsowebegantofeelveryfrightened.Idecidedtoclimbthetreetoseewherewewere.Somepeoplereadthebooksorwatchtelevisionwhileothershavesports.(4)Goodhealthisperson’smostvaluablepossession.anaa18\n连词常光顾Wetriedtofixitandtherewasnothingwecoulddo.ItoldMother,Father,Sister,allmyfriendsherewhatagreattimeIhad.ItisaveryimportantexambutIcan’taffordtofailit.Shewassmilingbutnoddingatme.短文改错对并列连词的考查主要涉及and,but,or,so等几个表示并列、转折、选择、因果等关系的词语。严格说来，这类错误主要属于行文逻辑的错误。butandandand19\nNMET2004:Iwoulddescribemyselfasshyandquietly._______NMET2005:Heaskedangryifwehadfinishedthework.______quietangrily四、还要注意形和副20\n短文改错对形容词与副词的考查主要涉及形容词和副词比较等级的误用(尤其是在本身已是比较级的词前误加more)、形容词与副词的混用(如修饰动词时误用形容词或修饰名词时误用副词)等，另外，用作表语时该用形容词的却误用了名词、简短副词(如in,down等)的误加与漏用、涉及形容词搭配的as…as结构、how与what的混用等也是常考的考点。21\nAfteranhourorsowebegantofeelveryfrightening.Charlessaid,“AssoonasIseearealytallbuilding,Iwanttoclimbit.LastSunday,policecarshurrytothetallerbuildinginNewYork.Asaresult,peopleinthemodernworldgenerallylivemuchmorelongerthanpeopleinthepast.Forinstance,onenightheplayedstrongandloudlymusictillfouro’clockinthemorning.frightenedreallytallestloud22\n这是考查最多的错误形式之一。主要有现在分词、过去分词，动名词和不定式错误。例如：NMET2001：Myparentsloveme…andwilldoalltheycanmakesure…＿＿＿＿NMET2002:Wefedmonkeys,visitingtemplesandtoldstories._______NMET2003:SoonIbegantoenjoytalktomyselfonpaperasIwaslearningtoexpressmyselfinsimpleEnglish.________tovisitedtalking五、非谓语，细辨别23\n主要考查习惯搭配方面的基础知识，其错误表现形式主要有三种：多词、少词和搭配错误。例如：NMET2000:Suddenly,IcaughtasightofmyEnglishteacher._______NMET2003:Myteacheradvisedmetokeepmydiary.______aa六、习惯用法要记牢24\n不同的句子成分要用不同的词类；不同的语境要选择不同的词语。只有对句子结构和成分作细致的分析，才能找出用词不当的错误。例如：NMET2004:Idon’tknowthattheydon’tliketotalkwithme.________NMET1997：IliveinBeijing，whereisthecapitalofChina._________whywhich七、句子成分多分析25\n(1)Inthelastfiveyearsthatthey’veclimbedchurches,highbuildingsandtelevisiontowers.(2)Charlessaid,“AssoonIseeareallytallbuilding,Iwanttoclimbit.(1)Heisthemanhiscarwasstolen.(2)That’sthehotelwhichwewerestayinglastsummer.(3)That’sthepalacewherewevisitedlastsummer.(4)Isuddenlywokeupinmid-night.AnditwasalongtimeIgottosleepagain.(5)Inthepastfewyearswhenwe’veplantedthousandsoftreesalongtheriveaswhosewhereWhich/thatbefore26\n短文改错应注意的问题四不改:①标点符号不改。②大小写不改。③词序错误不改。（不是不改，而是按错词或少词来改)。④在纲外生词不改。文中出现带汉语注释的词，在句中不可能用错。27\nAtChristmasEve,Jimwentwithhis1._____fathertochooseaChristmastree.Theychoose2._____abigone.Itwasalmostastallerastheroom!3._____Theyputtheminthecornerofthesitting4._________On_________chose_______tall_______it动词形介词短语常常考，习惯用法要记住还要注意形和副代词格，细领悟28\nroom.Katewascovereditwithalotof5._____Christmaslight.Thesittingroomlooked6.____reallybeautifullyatthemoment.Therewas7.________afireburninginthefireplace,buttheChristmas8.____treelightswereshinningbrightly.Jimandhis9.____parentssinginganddancinghappily.10.____＼was＼_______lights_____________beautiful____and√∧were动词形还要注意形和副动词形名词数冠词连词须关注29\nIoftendreamofateacher.Idreamofstandingonthe76.______platformintheclassroomandgivelessonstolovelyboys77.______andgirls.Iteachthem,playwiththem,butwatchthem78.______growingup.IamalwaysyoungwhenIwasstaying79.______withthem.Iknowthereisnoteasytobeateacher.You80.______havetolearninordertoteach.Withoutenoughknowledges81.______youcanneverlearnwell.Whatismore,youhavetobe82.______friendswithyourpupilsandtakegoodcareofhim.83.______Onlyinthiswaycanyoubeagoodteacherandwin84.______respectfromthem.ThoughIamastudentnow,Iwillworkasveryhardtomakemydreamcometrue.85.______∧beinggivingandamitknowledgeteachthemas√Practice30\nIlovecamping.It’smyfavoritewaytospentthesummervacation.Lastyear,myfamilyandIwentcampinginthecountryside.ItwasoneofthemostexcitedexperiencesIhadneverhad.Wesleptinatentandwentonalongwalkeveryday.Wecookoverafireandthefoodalwaystastedwonderfully.Forawholeweek,Isawlovelymountainviewsorbreathedfreshair.AtnightIheardthegentlewindblowinginthetree,andIfeltsopeaceful.Itdoesn’tcostmuchtocamp,andwhatIbelieveit’sthebestwaytogetclosenatureandenjoyitsbeauty.∧31