2018届二轮复习书面表达分类指导---祝贺信课件（17张） 17页

2018 届二轮复习 祝贺信 文体概述 祝贺信是指在日常生活中，得知同学或朋友竞赛获奖、考上大学、结婚、过新年或重大节日等，给对方祝贺的信件。书写时应做到真诚、自然、亲切动人。祝贺信通常包括 以下内容： 祝贺事由 → 所取得的成绩 → 被祝贺人过去的努力 → 被祝贺人的优点 → 表达自己的愿望。 常用语块 恭喜 / 祝贺 …… _________________________ 2. 实现 / 成真 _________________________ 3. 很高兴听到 …… _________________________ 4. 很高兴知道你 …… _________________________ 5. 我想表达我对 …… 的祝贺 _________________________ I would like to express my congratulations on… Congratulations on… come true How happy I am to hear… I have learned with delight that you… 6. 我为你 …… 感到非常高兴 ________________________ 7. …… 是相当令人振奋的消息！ ________________________ 8. 我知道这肯定是因为 …… ________________________ 是你非常值得的奖赏 ________________________ 10. 我希望 …… _______________________ It is a reward that you richly deserve for your… I feel very happy for you (r)… …is quite exciting news! I know this is surely owing to… I hope… 11. 请接受 …… ________________________ 12. 祝你一切顺利 ! ________________________ 13. 你们是天生的一对 ! ________________________ 14. 祝你心想事成 ! ________________________ 15. 祝你年年有今日，岁岁有今朝。 ________________________ I wish you many happy returns of the day. Please accept… Wish you all the best! You two are a perfect match! May all your wishes come true! 套用句式 我很高兴你梦想成真。 2. 我写这封信是为了表达我对你英语演讲比赛获得第一名的祝贺。 I feel very happy for your dream has come true. 2. I am writing to express my congratulations on your winning the first place in the English speech contest. 3. 祝贺你高考成功。 4. 请接受我最诚挚的问候。 5. 我希望你的未来是灿烂的。 3. Congratulations on your success in the National College Entrance Examination. 4. Please accept my warmest regards. 5. I hope your future will be glorious. 习作修改 ( 做短文改错，背经典范文 ) Dear Henry, I am writing to offer my sincerest congratulations your admission into the Biology Department of Peking University as a graduation. As your close friend, I just want you to know what lucky I am to be able to share your pride and how pleased I was at your admission. ∧ on graduate how am In my views, you work hard and besides that, you are a very intelligence person. This admission is a reward where you richly deserve. I am sure you will make a greater progress in your study and obtain a brightly future in your life. I wish you greater success in your school career and I am look forward to good news from you soon. Best wishes. Yours, Li Hua view intelligent that/which bright looking 1. 在 congratulations 后加 on congratulations on 是固定搭配，意为“祝贺 ……” 。 2. graduation →graduate 根据上下文意，此处应该是指“毕业生”，故用 graduate 。 3. what →how 感叹句句型，后面是形容词，故此处要用 how 。 4. was →am 从上下文时态可知，此处用一般现在时即可。 5. views →view 固定结构 in my view 意为“在我看来 (view 不能用复数 )” ，等于 in my opinion 。 6. intelligence →intelligent 修饰名词要用形容词。 7. where →that/which 这是定语从句，先行词 reward 是物，故用 that/which( 在从句中作宾语可省略 ) 。 8. 去掉 greater progress 前的 a progress 为不可数名词，前面不能加 a 。 9. brightly →bright 修饰名词要用形容词。 10. look →looking 因为此处表“正在期待”，故要用现在进行时。 课堂练习 假定你是李华，得知你的好友王强今年考上了北京大学 (Peking University) ，他来自贫困地区，是村里的第一位大学生。请你给他写一封祝贺信，要点如下： 1. 考上理想大学，父母骄傲。 2. 努力学习将来为家乡服务。 3. 对未来祝福。 注意： 1. 词数 100 左右。 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 3. 开头语和结束语已为你写好。 Dear Wang Qiang , Congratulations! I have learned with delight that you are admitted to Peking University, your ideal one! I know you have worked very hard in the past years, so I’m truly happy to know that you become the first college student of your village from the poor areas. I am sure your parents are greatly proud of you. I just want you to know how pleased I am to witness your success. This is a new start for you and it’s good for you to study with so many excellent students and learn from top professors. I wish you greater success in university and serve for the hometown in the future. Best wishes! Yours, Li Hua 课外作业 假定你是李华，得知你的外国笔友 Peter 获得了“汉语桥”世界大学生中文演讲比赛一等奖。你为他感到骄傲，并给他写一封祝贺信，要点如下： 1. 天天练习讲汉语，从不会到流利，终于成功。 2. 继续努力，有机会来中国留学。 3. 希望见面和交流。 注意： 1. 词数 100 左右。 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 3. 开头语和结束语已为你写好。 参考词汇： “汉语桥”世界大学生中文演讲比赛 “ Chinese Bridge” Chinese speech contest Dear Peter, I would like to express my congratulations to you on your receiving the first prize of “Chinese Bridge” Chinese speech contest. I know that you were not good at Chinese at first. However, you practiced speaking Chinese every day. As the saying goes, “Everything comes to him who waits ”. Finally, you succeeded! In my mind , this match is very difficult for a foreign student. So I’m so surprised that you become champion of this competition. If you go on studying Chinese harder, you will have the opportunity to study in China. At last, I hope to see you and communicate with each other. Sincere congratulations to you again! Yours, Li Hua