【英语】2019届二轮复习书面表达专题应用文10篇训练之七（17页word版） 16页

‎ 2019届二轮复习书面表达专题应用文10篇训练 ‎[一]‎ ‎ 美国某中学举办英语暑假训练营，开设以下课程：cooking, swimming, giving first aid, playing football / basketball。假定你是李华，请你写封申请信，报名参加其中一门课程的学习。内容包括：‎ ‎ 1. 你感兴趣的一门课程； ‎ ‎ 2. 为什么想学这门课程；‎ ‎ 3. 你期望从中学到什么。‎ ‎ 注意：1. 词数100左右；‎ ‎ 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。‎ Dear Sir / Madam,‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎ Yours,‎ ‎ Li Hua 参考范文：‎ Dear Sir / Madam,‎ ‎ I am very glad to hear that your school will start an English Summer Camp which includes a variety of courses, such as cooking, swimming, giving first aid, playing football or basketball. I am interested in giving first aid and I am writing to sign up for the course.‎ ‎ I choose to attend the courses due to the fact that first aid is of great importance to people. If a person gets injured and needs medical care before a doctor can be called in, every second counts in saving life, in which case the knowledge of first aid can help save lives. Besides, personally, I plan to study medicine and devote my life to medical research. Hopefully, the course will help me to learn about how to deal with medical emergencies.‎ ‎ I would appreciate it if you could take my application into consideration.‎ ‎ Yours,‎ ‎ Li Hua ‎[二]‎ 假设你正在参加全省中学生英语演讲比赛，请你针对有些父母经常翻看孩子日记或书包这一现象，写一篇演讲稿，陈述你的观点。‎ 演讲稿的主要内容应包括：‎ 认为同学们不必为此苦恼；‎ 希望能够体谅父母的苦衷；‎ 建议与父母进行交流和沟通。注意：‎ ‎1. 词数100左右；‎ ‎2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；‎ ‎3. 开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。‎ Good morning, ladies and gentleman. ‎ Some of us are having problems with our parents, as they often look into our school bags or read our diaries. ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ Thank you!‎ 参考范文 Good morning, ladies and gentlemen.‎ Some of us are having problems with our parents, as they often look into our school bags or read our diaries. I fully understand why we are not comfortable about it, but there’s no need to feel too sad. Our parents are checking our bags or diaries to make sure we’re not getting into any trouble. They have probably heard some horrible stories about other kids and thought we might do the same. Or perhaps they just want to connect with us but are doing it all wrong. ‎ My suggestion is: Tell them we want them to trust us as much as we’d ‎ like to trust them. If you don’t think you can talk to them, write them a letter and leave it lying around—they are bound to read it.‎ Thank you!‎ ‎[三]‎ 假如你正在参加学校举行的英语演讲比赛，就如何应对全球变暖这一话题发表自己的见解，号召同学们过低碳生活，为减少二氧化碳（CO2）排放做贡献。请就这一话题写一篇演讲稿，陈述你自己的观点。‎ 演讲稿应包括以下内容：‎ ‎1. 节能减排，低碳生活，人人可为。‎ ‎2.改变以往的家庭生活习惯。（如用电，用水）‎ ‎3.出行使用公共交通工具或骑自行车。‎ 要求：1. 词数：不少于120。 2.可适当增加内容细节，以使行文连贯。‎ 提示：低碳生活low-carbon life 碳排放 carbon emission燃料 fuel ‎________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ 参考范文：‎ Good morning, everyone,‎ ‎ My topic today is how to live a low-carbon life. As we all know, the earth is becoming warmer and warmer due to the global climate change. Many people may think that low-carbon life is far away from us. However, every one of us can reduce our daily carbon emissions by doing something.‎ ‎ Firstly, changing our previous living habit of wasting things is the first step. We can use energy-saving electricity lights instead of the traditional lights, and turn them off when we don’t use them. Never leave the water running when we don’t use it. When we need to contact someone , it’s better to send an e-mail than use paper to write letters.‎ ‎ Use the public transport or ride your bicycle instead of driving private cars when we travel somewhere. Even if we have to drive, we’d better plan it well in advance to avoid wasting fuel.‎ It is believed that the global climate change is due to the human activities. Only if we know what we do in our daily life and live a low-carbon life can we make a difference.‎ ‎[四]‎ 假如你是李华，进入高中一月有余了，你的朋友Jim来信想了解你的生活，特别是交友情况。请你写一封回信，告诉他你在新的学校是如何交上新朋友的。内容包括：‎ ‎1. 与人相处方式：微笑，助人 ‎2. 通过一些活动：课外：军训，拔河 课内：上课，共同解决学习的问题 ‎3. 你对交友的看法。‎ 参考词汇： 军训military training 拔河tug-of-war ‎1. 词数 100 左右，开头结尾不计入词数；‎ ‎2.开头结尾已为你写好；‎ ‎3. 请勿泄露你的个人信息；‎ ‎4. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。‎ Dear Jim:‎ How’s everything going? Thank you for your letter. Now I’m writing to tell you how I make new friends in my new school.‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ Best wishes!‎ Yours,‎ Li Hua ‎【答案】Dear Jim:‎ How’s everything going? Thank you for your letter. Now I’m writing to tell you how I make new friends in my new school.‎ When I first meet my new friends，I smile and say hello to them. I believe a smile can help us make friends in a world of strangers. Also, I try to help them when necessary.‎ There are many activities which can help us get to know each other quickly. At the beginning of the term we all took part in military training. And then we joined in the tug-of-war and other activities. As we study in the same class, we often deal with problems together.‎ In my opinion, friends are really important. I know I am not alone here. I'm also lucky to have you as my friend. I just cannot imagine a world without friends.‎ Best wishes!‎ Yours,‎ Li Hua ‎【分析】‎ 本文书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封书信。‎ ‎【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，本文是一篇书信：假如你是李华，进入高中一月有余了，你的朋友Jim来信想了解你的生活，特别是交友情况。请你写一封回信，告诉他你在新的学校是如何交上新朋友的。内容包括：1. 与人相处方式：微笑，助人；2. 通过一些活动：课外：军训，拔河 课内：上课，共同解决学习的问题；3. 你对交友的看法。‎ 第2步：根据写作要求确定关键词，如：make new friends in my new school（在我的新学校交新朋友）；say hello to them（向他们问好）；in a world ‎ of strangers（在一个陌生人的世界）；took part in military training（参加军训）等。‎ 第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态语态问题。‎ 第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。‎ ‎【点睛】本文是一封书信，格式正确，内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。同时文中使用高级句子。Now I’m writing to tell you how I make new friends in my new school.句中how引导宾语从句；When I first meet my new friends，I smile and say hello to them.句中when引导时间状语从句；There are many activities which can help us get to know each other quickly.句中使用which引导的定语从句。‎ ‎[五]‎ 假如你是李华。你的英国朋友Jim所在的学校要组织学生来中国旅行，有两条路线可以选择：“长江之行”或“泰山之旅”。Jim来信希望你能给些建议。请你给他回信，内容包括：‎ ‎1.你建议的路线；‎ ‎2.你的理由 ‎3.你的祝愿。‎ 可能用到的词汇：the Yangtze River 长江 Mount Tai泰山 注意：1.词数120左右；‎ ‎2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；‎ ‎3.开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。‎ Dear Jim.‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________‎ Yours,‎ Li Hua ‎【答案】Dear Jim,‎ I’m happy to receive your letter and I know you are coming to China.‎ Of the two trips to the Yangtze River and Mount Tai, both are highly recommended. Personally, I prefer the tour along the Yangtze River, the longest river and one of the mother rivers of Chinese civilization. You can learn a lot about the history of China and Chinese people. Moreover, the scenery along the river is amazing, with many well-known sightseeing spots such as the Three Gorges Dam. That’s why I think the rip along the Yangtze River will be a better choice.‎ Hope you’ll have a good time in China.‎ Yours Li Hua ‎【解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文写作，要求写一封信。‎ ‎【详解】根据提示信息，假如你是李华。你的英国朋友Jim所在的学校要组织学生来中国旅行，有两条路线可以选择：“长江之行”或“泰山之旅”。Jim来信希望你能给他一些建议。本文人称第一人称为主，时态为一般现在式。 考生应当仔细阅读题干要求，明确要点，确保行文时不遗漏；明确文体，根据文体特征写作。根据写作要求本文分为三段，第一段讲述一下你建议的路线；第二段详述一下你选择这个路线的理由；第三段表达出你的祝福。在遣词上，考生应尽量使用一些高级词汇、短语和复合句型，此外，还应注意恰当使用连接词，以提高文章的逻辑性和层次感。‎ 亮点说明 本文内容完整，语言表述简洁，很符合该类文章的写作特点。文章使用了几个高分句型1. the scenery along the river is amazing, with many well-known sightseeing spots such as the Three Gorges Dam 本句中使用了现在分词amazing作表语，with的介词短语作状语的形式。2. That’s why I think the trip along the Yangtze River will be a better choice. 此句是由why引导的表语从句。这些句式的恰当运用，不仅为文章增色，还展示了作者具有较高的语言运用能力和较高的写作水平。‎ ‎【点睛】在写作中为了使文章显得更流畅，语言具有逻辑性，条理清晰，写作时要使用一些衔接词。过度衔接词有开篇表达（recently, at first, so far, at present, as we all know, up to now等）、时间顺顺序（firstly, later, then, since, after that等）、并列递进（besides, in addition, even worse, what’s worse等）、列举事实（such as, that is to say, in other words等）、前因后果（because, since, due to, so…that, as a result of等）、转折过渡（but, however, while, in spite of, otherwise等）和总结概括（in short, all in all, on the whole, in one’s opinion, in a word等）。本文的过渡衔接词用的就非常好，开篇使用了衔接词Personally，还使用了moreover，这些衔接词的使用使行文流畅，极具条理性，也是文章的提分点。‎ ‎[六]‎ 假定你是李华，是你校足球队的队长（captain）,请你用英语给你市足球队的外籍运动员Robert写一份邮件。内容包括：‎ ‎1.你喜欢他的原因；‎ ‎2.你的梦想；‎ ‎3.希望他能来你校访问并指导。‎ 注意1. 词数100左右；‎ ‎2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。(邮件的开头和结尾已给出)‎ Dear Robert,‎ I’m Li Hua, ____________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________‎ Yours sincerely Li Hua ‎【答案】Dear Robert,‎ I’m Li Hua, captain of our school football team. I’m very happy to write to you.‎ I’ve been your fan ever since I was a little boy. Every time I watch you playing football, I can’t help cheering for you. Your skills and confidence have been encouraging me these days. My dream is to be a football player like you and compete in the World Cup. I hope you can visit our school give us some advice on playing football if possible.‎ I’m looking forward to your reply.‎ Yours sincerely Li Hua ‎【解析】本文是一篇半开放类书面表达，要求考生把自己当成李华，李华是校足球队的队长（captain）,请用英语给你市足球队的外籍运动员Robert写一份邮件，说明你喜欢他的原因及你的梦想并邀请他来校访问指导。‎ ‎【详解】第1步：审题。根据提示可知本文是一封电子邮件，要求考生用英语给市足球队的外籍运动员Robert 写一份邮件，说明你喜欢他的原因及你的梦想并邀请他来校访问指导。全文以一般现在时和第一、二人称为主。‎ 第2步：组织要点。1.你喜欢他的原因：技巧纯熟、自信心强；2.你的梦想：成为一名足球运动员并参加世界杯；3.希望他能来访问并指导。‎ 第3步：根据提示及关键词组进行遣词造句，关键词为captain、 can’t help cheering、 skills and confidence、 compete in the World Cup、 give some advice on等。写作时注意电子邮件的格式和惯用语。‎ 第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。‎ ‎【点睛】本篇范文结构完美，条理清晰。范文时态和人称运用准确，涵盖了文字提示要求的所有要点，且有适当的个人发挥。考生运用了多样式的句型结构，整篇文章富有变化，并不死板。使用了较多的高级词汇，如captain、 can’t help cheering等；尽量运用了丰富的句式，同时文章的一些串联成分让各个要点更为紧密地结合在一起。以上写作技巧的运用提升了文章的层次，显示了考生具有很强的驾驭语言的能力。‎ ‎[七]‎ 为了丰富学生的校园生活并加深对学校的了解，你校学生会将组织学生观看一部英文短片Growing Together, 假设你是李华，请你以组织者的身份写一则英文书面通知，内容包括：‎ ‎1. 短片内容：学校的发展和成就；‎ ‎2. 放映时间、地点；‎ ‎3. 欢迎对短片提出意见。‎ 注意：1. 词数100左右；‎ ‎2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎【答案】Notice In order to help our students better understand our school as well as enrich their campus life, I’m glad to inform you that a short video,‎ ‎ Growing Together, will be played by our Students’ Union.‎ The video, half an hour in length, will be shown in the assembly hall, next Friday afternoon from 4:00pm to 4:30pm. It will introduce the history, development and achievement of our school in English, which can also interest the international students and foreign teachers. Also, excellent graduates from key universities will be invited to join us and share their learning experience. ‎ All the students who want to attend are expected to come. If you have an interest in the activity, please sign up for it before this Sunday by sending an email to Lihua@qq.com. Don’t miss the chance, and your valuable suggestions are most welcome.‎ Students’ Union ‎【解析】这篇书面表达属于应用类作文，是一封通知。‎ ‎【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，为了丰富学生的校园生活并加深对学校的了解，你校学生会将组织学生观看一部英文短片Growing Together, 假设你是李华，请你以组织者的身份写一则英文书面通知。人称为第三人称，时态应为一般将来时。‎ 第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：in order to为了，enrich充实，campus life校园生活，inform通知，in length长度，assembly hall礼堂，international国际的，key universities重点大学，attend参加，sign up报名。‎ 第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。‎ 第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。‎ ‎[八]‎ 学校图书馆需要购置一批新书，现向学生征求意见。假如你是李华，请你用英语给图书馆王老师写一封信，推荐科普类图书（popular science books）和文学类图书（literary books），并分别说明推荐理由。‎ 注意：100词左右，结尾已给，不计入总词数。‎ Dear Mr. Wang,‎ Knowing that our library is going to buy books, …‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________________________‎ I’d appreciate it if you could take my recommendation into account.‎ Yours,‎ Li Hua ‎【答案】Dear Mr. Wang, ‎ Knowing that our library is going to buy books, I’m writing to give some suggestions. ‎ What we need most are popular science books. Usually popular science books explain basic principles of nature in a simple and interesting way. They help us understand science subjects better and arouse our curiosity about scientific discoveries. ‎ In addition to reading for knowledge, we read for fun and inspiration. That is why I recommend another group of books：literary books. I think Classic works written by masters, present great thoughts through interesting stories and language. They not only offer us joy and excitement, but also encourage us to think critically. ‎ I’d appreciate it if you could take my recommendation into account.‎ Yours,‎ Li Hua ‎【解析】‎ 本文是一篇半开放性书面表达，要求考生把自己当成李华，请你用英语给图书馆王老师写一封信，推荐科普类图书和文学类图书，并分别说明推荐理由。‎ ‎【详解】第1步：审题。根据文字提示可知本文是一封信，要求考生说明推荐科普类图书和文学类图书的理由。全文以一般现在时和第三人称为主。‎ 第2步：组织要点。1. 学校图书馆需要购置一批新书，现向学生征求意见。2.推荐科普类图书的原因：用自然的方法介绍基本原理，帮助学生理解科学现象并激发学生的好奇心。3.推荐文学类图书的原因：此类图书可以给人快乐和灵感，传递伟大思想，鼓励批判性思维。‎ 第3步：根据提示及关键词组进行遣词造句，关键词为explain basic principles of nature、understand science subjects、arouse our curiosity、for fun and inspiration、present great thoughts、think critically、take…into account等。写作时注意信件的格式和惯用语。‎ 第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。‎ ‎[八]‎ 假设你是红星中学高一学生李华。请用英语给初中同学写一封信，介绍你校高一新生的生活情况。信中应包含以下内容：‎ ‎1.课程设置和作业情况 ‎2.作息时间及学习生活情况 ‎3.课余生活 注意：词数不少于100;‎ 提示词：timetable（时间表）；extracurricular activities（课外活动）‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎____________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎___________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎【答案】Dear Meimei,‎ ‎ It's great to hear from you．I’d like to tell you something about the lifestyle of our Senior One students.‎ ‎ Every day we’re very busy. We have more subjects than we did in junior high school. With more subjects to learn, we have more homework to do. Of all the subjects we enjoy the computer lessons most. ‎ ‎ We have lessons from Monday to Friday, and we spend a long time at school. Every morning we arrive at school at 7:00 and leave school at 5:30 in the afternoon. In my opinion, it’s really a pity that we have to start such a stressful life in Senior One.‎ ‎ Though our life is busy, we still have time to relax. The boys enjoy playing basketball, while many of the girls relax by playing ping-pong.‎ ‎ That’s all. With best wishes.‎ Yours,‎ ‎ Li Hua ‎【解析】这篇书面表达属于应用类作文，要求写一封信。‎ ‎【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，假设你是红星中学高一学生李华。请用英语给初中同学写一封信，介绍你校高一新生的生活情况。人称为第一人称，时态应为一般现在时。‎ 第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：hear from收到…的信， lifestyle生活方式，subject科目，junior high初中，arrive at到达，pity遗憾，stressful有压力的，relax放松，enjoy doing喜欢做某事。‎ 第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。‎ 第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。‎ ‎【点睛】作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如：it’s really a pity that we have to start such a stressful life in Senior One.主语从句的运用。本文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。‎ ‎[九]‎ 假定你是李华，你的美国朋友Jack下学期将作为交换生来你校学习，他想学习传统中国画。请你写封邮件给他建议。内容包括：‎ ‎1. 选修你校开设的中国画课程；‎ ‎2. 上课时间和地点；‎ ‎3. 工具和材料：毛笔、墨和宣纸等；‎ 参考词汇： ‎ 选修课 optional course  中国画 Chinese Painting  ‎ 毛笔 Chinese writing brush宣纸 Xuan paper 注意：1. 词数100左右；‎ ‎2. 可以适当增加细节使行文连贯。‎ Hi Jack,‎ Hope you are getting ready for the exchange program! Last time, you mentioned that you were interested in traditional Chinese painting. ‎ It has occurred to me that my school will offer an optional course on learning to paint in a traditional Chinese style. The class will meet every Friday from 12: 00 pm to 2: 00 pm in Room 211 at the new Yifu building.‎ If you are interested, please remember to register. When you arrive, I can take you to buy the appropriate tools such as Chinese writing brushes, ink, and Xuan paper. Please let me know, and see you soon!‎ ‎                                                                 Yours,‎ Li Hua ‎ ‎[十]‎ 假定你是李华，你的外国朋友John对茶感兴趣。请你结合下面图示，用英语给他写一封邮件，诚邀他参加即将在宁波举办的化节，并简要介绍茶文化节活动及我国茶的历史，茶的益处等。‎ 注意：‎ ‎1. 字数100字左右；2. 可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。‎ Hi John,‎ I’m glad you’re interested in tea. Now I have good news to tell you. The 9th International Tea Culture Festival will be held in Ningbo, a coastal city in East China from May 3 to 6.‎ ‎ I’d like to invite you to the festival, where you can taste all kinds of tea from across the world, and enjoy tea art shows. China has a long history of tea planting. Tea has become a green, healthy and popular drink in our daily life. People would serve you with tea when you visit their homes.‎ ‎ I’m sure you’d have lots of fun here. I hope you would come and experience Chinese tea culture in person.‎ ‎                                                                                                                                                Best,                                                                    Li Hua