徐州专版2020中考英语复习方案第一篇教材考点梳理话题写作04安全问题课件 27页

话题写作 （四） 安全问题 第一篇　教材考点梳理 【 话题点睛 】 该话题主要涉及如何保护人身安全、校园安全、交通安全等 , 此类试题常以要点提示的方式来考查。 【 参考谚语 】 1.Caution is the parent of safety. 小心驶得万年船。 2.Safety at first. 安全第一。 常用表达 【 相关短语 】 call the police 报警 ; ask teachers for help 向老师求助 ; go upstairs/downstairs 上 / 下楼 ; without permission 未经许可 ; keep away from 远离 …… ; how to protect ourselves 如何保护我们自己 ; follow the school rules 遵守校规 ; obey the traffic rules 遵守交通规则 ; be strict with 对 …… 要求严格 【 亮点句型 】 安全与自我保护 1. If we are in danger, we must call the police or ask teachers for help in time so that we can keep ourselves safe. 2. Self-protection is one of the most important skills, especially for teenagers. 3. It's dangerous to swim in the river alone, so don't go to the river without permission. 4. All in all, we need to learn how to protect ourselves and stay away from danger. 安全规则及建议 1. We shouldn't crowd or push each other when we go upstairs or downstairs at school. 2. To be safer, we should keep away from the Internet bar, and go to school and go back home on time. 3. When facing an accident, the first and most important rule is to stay calm. 4. Friends can make our life colorful, but we must be careful to make friends, especially online. Ⅰ. 根据汉语意思完成句子。 1. 我们应该尽我们最大的努力来确保我们是安全的。 We should try our best to 　　　　　　　　 we are safe.  2. 我们需要和同学友好相处。 We need to 　　　　　　　　　　　　 our classmates.  3. 对我们来说 , 吃更健康的食物和遵守交通规则是重要的。 It's important for us to eat more healthy food and 　 　　　　　　　　 .  基础写作 make sure get on/along well with obey the traffic rules 4. 我们必须对自己严格要求。 We must 　　　　　　　　 ourselves.  5. 司机立刻拨打了 120 电话 , 救护车马上就到了。 The driver 　　　　 120 at once and an ambulance came 　　　　　　 .  be strict with called in no time Ⅱ. 用括号内所给提示将下列句子译成英语。 1. 自我保护对于青少年来说是最重要的技能之一。 (self-protection) 2. 如今学生的安全正变成我们所有人的焦点。 (focus) 3. 无论你是谁 , 做什么 , 安全是最重要的。 (no matter) 4. 当我们交朋友时 , 尤其是在网上 , 我们应该小心一点。 (be careful) Self-protection is one of the most important skills for teenagers. Today students' safety is becoming the focus to us all. No matter who you are, what you do, safety is the most important. We should be careful when we make friends, especially online. 5. 在学校 , 我们应该遵守校规。 (follow rules) 　 树立自我保护意识 , 健康快乐地成长是每个青少年的必修课 , 下面是某地关心下一代工作委员会为青少年编写的 《 青少年自我保护、健康成长手册 》 的部分内容。作为一名中学生 , 写一篇文章 , 内容包括 :① 陈述你是怎样践行手册中提及的三条事项的 ;② 补充至少一条你认为重要的其他事项。 典例分析 We should follow the school rules at school. 　 　 Improve Child Self-protection 　　 Make Children Grow Healthily 1.About traffic rulesrun the red light ×cross the zebra walk( 斑马线 ) √　 2.About foodeat fruit and vegetables √ eat fast food × 3.About making friendsmeet strangers alone ×help each other √ ? [ 要求 ] (1) 语言通顺 , 要点齐全 , 意思连贯 , 条理清楚 , 书写规范 ; (2) 文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校名称 ; (3)80-100 词 , 文章开头和结尾已给出 , 不计入总词数。 Self-protection is one of the most important skills for teenagers. But how do I protect myself and grow up healthily ? Now let me share my experience and ideas with you. First, I always obey the traffic rules In short, if we obey the rules and take care of ourselves, we will grow up safely and healthily. 【 思路点拨 】 1. 要点提炼 : 主题是如何践行 《 青少年自我保护、健康成长手册 》 中提及的三条事项 , 并补充一条其他事项 , 可从以下几个方面展开 : 交通安全、食品安全及交友安全等 ; 2. 确定人称 : 写作时以第一人称为主 , 偶尔涉及第三人称 ; 3. 确定时态 : 介绍如何践行手册内容 , 通常用一般现在时 , 偶尔涉及将来时。 【 写作架构 】 【 佳作欣赏 】 Self-protection is one of the most important skills for teenagers. But how do I protect myself and grow up healthily? Now let me share my experience and ideas with you. First, I always obey the traffic rules and I never run the red light. When the traffic light is red, I won't go until it turns green. I always cross the zebra walk because it's safe. Second, I often eat healthily and safely. It's important to eat more fruit and vegetables. Eating too much fast food will do harm to my body. Third, I never meet strangers alone, especially friends who I make on the Internet. At the same time if we are true friends, we should help each other. What's more, I'd like to give you some advice. Now summer is coming. It's dangerous for us to swim alone, especially in deep lakes or rivers. So don't do that. In short, if we obey the rules and take care of ourselves, we will grow up safely and healthily. 【 名师点评 】 1. 文章根据要点提示 , 逐一地阐述了如何保护自己 , 远离危险 , 并做到了适当展开 , 详略得当。 2. 本文结构合理 , 思路清晰。开头 : 引出话题 ; 正文 : 提出自我保护的方法 ; 结尾 : 总结提醒。全文句式多样化 , 简单句和复合句相结合使用 , 使文章错落有致 , 给人良好的阅读体验。 实战演练 A 　 [2017· 徐州 ] 　　图中女子 Nancy 是个“手机控” , 昨天她在街上因为使用手机发生了交通事故。请根据图片提示 , 写一篇 90 词左右的短文 , 简要描述这件事情 , 并谈谈自己的看法。 [ 要求 ] (1) 短文已给出的部分不计入总词数 ; (2) 可适当增加细节 , 使行文连贯、通顺 ; (3) 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。 [ 参考词汇 ] ambulance 救护车　 stretcher 担架 Exercising is important! Nancy is crazy about using a mobile — she uses it at table, in bed, even at work. Yesterday, when Nancy was walking on the street, she took out and wanted to take a photo of herself. She hoped to look best so she moved to the middle of the road. Soon a car drove by. The driver saw Nancy and tried to stop the car, but it was too late. Nancy was hit and she fell over. The driver called 120 at once and an ambulance came in no time. Luckily, Nancy wasn't badly hurt. She still kept on taking photos of herself when she was lying on Mobiles have become part of our lives. the stretcher! Only when we use mobiles properly can we enjoy the convenience and pleasure. Otherwise we may get hurt, just like Nancy. B 2020 年 3 月 30 日是我国第 25 个中小学“安全教育日”。为了进一步增强中学生的安全意识 , 提髙自我保护能力 , 某校开展了以“安全”为主题的英语演讲比赛。请你根据以下要点提示写一篇演讲稿。 How to Keep Safe 饮食安全 健康饮食 , 不暴饮暴食 , 不吃垃圾食品 (junk food) 出行安全 1. 遵守交通规则 , 不乱横穿马路 2. …… 水、火 等安全 1. 不要独自下水游泳 , 不在河边玩耍…… 2. 不要在家中玩火。若家中起火 , 不要害怕 , 立刻报警求救 3. …… 你的观点 至少两点 [ 注意 ] (1) 词数 90 词左右 ( 短文的开头已给出 , 不计入总词数 ); (2) 短文必须包括所有要点 , 可适当发挥 , 使短文连贯通顺 ; (3) 文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等具体信息。 How to Keep Safe 　　 As teenagers, we should always keep safety in mind. But how can we keep safe? Here are some of my suggestions.  First, we should eat healthily and safely. Don't eat too much. Eating some junk food will do harm to our health. Second, we should obey the traffic rules. It's dangerous to walk across the road carelessly. Remember to ride your bikes slowly when you go to school. Third, don't go swimming alone and don't play near the rivers. Children mustn't play with fire at home. If the house catches fire, the first thing is to call the police for help at once. In my opinion, all the teenagers should learn how to protect ourselves and keep safety all the time. We can hand out some leaflets to people and make them know the importance of safety.