徐州专版2020中考英语复习方案第一篇教材考点梳理话题写作07情感表达课件 26页

话题写作 （七） 情感表达 第一篇　教材考点梳理 【 话题点睛 】 话题来源于学生日常生活中对某件事情的经历及感受 , 常见的情感类表达有爱、快乐、微笑、幸福、痛苦和烦恼等。 【 参考谚语 】 1. A smile makes you ten years younger. 笑一笑 , 十年少。 2. Joy and sorrow are next-door neighbors. 悲喜常相伴。 3. Laughter is the best medicine. 笑是最好的药。 4. Worry kills more men than work. 忧虑比劳累更伤人。 常用表达 【 相关短语 】 thanks for … 因 …… 感谢 …… ; make new friends 结交新朋友 ; look after/take care of 照顾 ; keep in touch 保持联系 ; be friendly to 对 …… 友好 ; bring back 带回 【 亮点句型 】 学校的感受 1. I'd like to thank you for giving me unselfish love and help. 2. You always encouraged me to study harder. 3. Although you were very strict with me, I understood what you said in the end. 4. I'm so thankful to you for your kind help that I'll work harder and try to do better in the future. 家庭的感受 1. I'd like to show my thanks to you for your devotion to me these years. 2. I'm sure my parents will get on with each other soon. 3. We should have good habits and try our best to take exercise every day. 4. I'll spend more time staying and communicating with you. 5. When I failed an exam and felt stressed, you were the one to encourage me. 6. I believe if we do so, we can have a happy life. Ⅰ. 根据汉语意思完成句子。 1. 在我去上学和回来的路上 , 你们总是和我在一起。 　　　　　　　　 to and from school, you were always with me.  2. 我将会尽我最大的努力去理解你 , 并且为你做我所能做的。 I'll 　　　　　　　　 to understand you and do what I can for you.  3. 我担心他们 , 并且非常害怕失去我的家人。 I'm 　　　　　　　　 them and 　　　　　　　　 losing my family very much.  基础写作 On my way 　 try my best 　 worried about afraid of 4. 坚持你的梦想 , 你一定能做到的 ! 　　　　　　　　 your dream and you can make it.  5. 父亲鼓励我 , 并在必要时给我帮助。 Father 　 　　　 me and gave me a 　　　　 when necessary.  Stick to 　 encouraged hand Ⅱ. 用括号内所给提示将下列句子译成英语。 1. 自我出生起 , 父母就一直无微不至地照顾我。 (take good care of) 2. 我们应该学会与家人好好相处。 (get along well with) 3. 学生不应该被允许花太多时间玩电脑游戏。 (be allowed to do) Since I was born, my parents have taken good care of me. We should learn to get along well with our family. Students shouldn't be allowed to spend much time playing computer games. 4. 他们总是因为一些不必要的事情争吵。 (because of) 5. 没有老师的帮助 , 我就不会通过这次考试。 (without) They always argue with each other because of some unnecessary things. Without the teacher's help, I couldn't pass the exam. [ 要点 ] (1) 给我生命 , 一直照顾我成长 ;(2) 努力工作 , 为我提供良好的生活和教育条件 ; (3) 拥有爱心 , 教我学会 …… ; (4) 今天 , 我要为你们 …… ( 自主发挥 , 至少两点 ) [ 注意事项 ] (1) 词数 80 左右 , 开头已给出 , 不计入总词数 : (2) 文中不得出现其实的地名、校名、人名等信息。 典例分析 　 [2019 · 天水 ] “你养我长大 , 我陪你变老。”父母一直在为我们的成长默默付出 , 成长要学会感受爱、回报爱。今天你即将毕业 , 是向父母表达感激的好机会。请根据以下所给要点 , 写一篇英语短文。 You raise me up. I will be with you in your life. You are important persons in the process of my growth. 【 思路点拨 】 1. 要点提炼 : 主题是表达对父母的感激 , 同时也表达出对父母的爱。可以从以下几个方面展开 : (1) 父母的付出 , 如照顾、帮助、鼓励、教育“我”等 ; (2) “我”对父母的回报 , 如努力学习、希望父母永远幸福、健康等。 2. 确定时态 : 一般现在时 ( 谈论现在父母为“我”付出 ) 和一般将来时 ( “我”将要对父母的回报 ) 3. 确定人称 : 第一人称 【 写作架构 】 【 佳作欣赏 】 You raise me up. I will be with you in your life. You are important persons in the process of my growth. You give me life and take care of me all the time. When I have problems with my study and life, you are always patient enough to help me and encourage me. In order to let me live a pleasant life and receive a good education, you always work hard from morning to evening every day. You are also the people who have a heart full of love. You are ready to help people in need. It is you who teach me to be a kind person. In the past, I never said “ I love you ” to you. Today I will graduate, I want to say it to you loudly. I will study harder to get better results. I hope you will be happy and healthy forever. 【 名师点评 】 1. 本文表达对父母的感恩之情 , 处处流露着真情实感。文章后面具体描述了在成长过程中 , 父母是如何对“我”付出的 , 体现了父母对子女无私的爱。在短文的结尾处 , 作者表达了要努力学习取得好的成绩来回报父母的付出 , 首尾呼应。 2. 文章中运用了一些从句和短语 , 如 when, who, take care of, in order to 等 , 体现了作者扎实的基本功。 实战演练 A 　　分享是一种行为方式 , 也是一种良好的品质 (quality) 。人生处处充满分享 , 懂得分享非常重要。分享快乐 , 快乐加倍 ; 分担烦恼 , 烦恼减半。 请根据以上观点 , 结合思维导图所示 , 以“ My Sharing Experience ”为题 , 写一篇 90 词左右的短文。 [ 要求 ] (1) 短文必须包括所有要点提示 , 语句通顺 , 意思连贯 , 可适当发挥 ; (2) 标题和开头已给出 , 不计入总词数 ; (3) 文中不得出现个人真实姓名和校名。 [ 参考词汇 ] be full of, cut … in half, thanks to, overcome My Sharing Experience Sharing is a way of behavior as well as a good quality of people. Life is full of sharing. I think it's important to share happiness and sadness with others. When I was ten, we moved to a new district. Facing the strange surroundings, I felt lonely and upset. It was my neighbour, Tim, who helped me find pleasure again. He showed me around and introduced new friends to me. He also shared his favourite books, music and learning methods with me. We soon became good friends. Thanks to his sharing, I began to share with others. As we know, when happiness is shared, it will be doubled; when a problem is shared, it is like cutting it in half. Sharing brings us pleasure, confidence and courage to overcome difficulties. Let's open our hearts to share with others in our future life! B [2019· 苏州 ] 假定你是苏华 , 最近你的澳大利亚笔友 Nathan 犯了一些错误 , 倍感懊恼 , 他给你写了一封邮件向你诉说 , 为帮助他排解困感 , 请你根据他的邮件内容并结合自身经历。用英语回信开导他。 To: Su Hua@China.com From: Nathan@Australia.com Subjects: Learning from mistakes Dear Su Hua, 　　 I'm unhappy that I've made some mistakes recently. They're troubling me a lot these days. I really need your help. Would you please share your experience with me? · Do you agree that everyone makes mistakes? · Can you tell me one of your mistakes ? （续表） · How did you deal with your problem? · What have you learned from the mistake? I'm looking forward to hearing from you soon. Best wishes, Nathan （续表） [ 注意 ] (1) 词数 90 左右。开头和结尾已经写好 , 不计入总词数 ; (2) 回复必须包括所有要点 , 可适当发挥 , 使短文连贯、通顺 ; (3) 文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。 Dear Nathan, I'm sorry to know that you are not happy these days. You needn't worry too much. It's true that everyone makes mistakes. Take me for example. One day, I spent so much time playing football with my friends that I forgot to do my homework. I said sorry to my teacher and finished it the next day. I found it important to achieve a balance between schoolwork and hobbies. It doesn't matter whether or not you make mistakes. What matters most is to correct and learn from them. In this way, I hope my experience can help you out. Best wishes, Su Hua   others will understand you. Then you will feel much better.