河北专版2020中考英语复习方案第一篇教材考点梳理话题写作06情感表达课件人教新目标版 24页

话题写作 （六） 情感表达 第一篇　教材考点梳理 【 话题点睛 】 话题来源于学生日常生活中对某件事情的经历及感受 , 常见的情感类表达有爱、快乐、微笑、幸福、痛苦和烦恼等。 每个人生活中都要面对各种各样的困难。该怎样缓解自己的压力呢 ? 请你以“ Less Pressure, Better Life ”为题 , 根据下表内容写一篇演讲稿。 典例分析 Stress 人们会因困难觉得失望、疲惫或者忧伤 , 承受着巨大的压力 Ways to relax 改变 你的 想法 想一想你最喜欢的人或事 而不是想那些麻烦 你还 可以这样 做 听音乐、唱歌、锻炼等 , 这些都能让你高兴起来 寻求帮助 , 和父母、老师或朋友多沟通 My points 耐心一点儿。其实困难也许并不可怕 , 相信我们的生活会更美好 [ 要求 ] （ 1 ）不要逐字逐句翻译 , 可适当发挥 ; （ 2 ）语句通顺、语意连贯 ; （ 3 ）词数 :100 左右 , 开头和结尾已给出 , 不计入总词数。 [ 参考词汇 ] under much pressure, deal with, change one's mind, think about, instead of, cheer up, for help, just need to Less Pressure, Better Life Hello, boys and girls! 　　 Thank you for your coming today. I'm very glad that all of you are full of hope for the future.        That's all.Thank you. 【 思路点拨 】 1. 要点提炼 : 主题是讲面对压力 , 如何来处理。文章主要有三个要点 : （ 1 ）压力概述 ; （ 2 ）减压措施 ; （ 3 ）自己的观点。 2. 确定时态 : 一般现在时。 3. 确定人称 : 第三人称 , 第一人称。 【写作架构】 【 基础写作 】 Ⅰ. 写主干句（根据所给提示补全下列各句。） 1. 我们应该尽力采取一些措施去处理它。（ try to do sth. ） We should 　　　　　　 　　　　　 to deal with it.  2. 我们可以改变我们的想法。（ change one's mind ） We can 　　　　　　　　　　　 .  3. 想一想你最喜欢的人或事而不是那些麻烦。（ instead of ） 　　　　　　 your favourite people or things 　　 　　　　　　 .  try to take some measures change our minds Think about instead of those troubles 4. 我们可以参加更多的活动 , 例如音乐俱乐部和足球队。（ such as ） We can take part in more activities, 　　　　 　　　　 and the football team.  5. 我们可以尽可能多地发现机会去和别人交流。（ as … as …） We can find as many 　　　　　 　　　　　　　 communicate with others.   such as the music club opportunities as possible to Ⅱ. 句子升格（按括号中的要求改写句子。） 1.Some students study very hard. They are still poor in their studies. （用 though 改写句子） 　　　　　 　　　　　 　　   2.Others think they have much homework to do.And they have no time to play. （用 so … that …改写句子） 　　　　　 　　　　　 　　   3.We can take part in more activities.All these activities can relieve our anxiety and make us relaxed. （用定语从句改写句子） 　　　　　 　　　　　 　　    Though some students study very hard, they are still poor in their studies. Others think they have so much homework to do that they have no time to play. We can take part in more activities which can relieve our anxiety and make us relaxed. 4.We can reduce our stress by taking the above suggestions. （用 only by 位于句首改写句子） 　　 　　　 　　　　　　　   Only by taking the above suggestions can we reduce our stress. 【连句成文】 Less Pressure, Better Life Hello, boys and girls! 　　 Thank you for your coming today. I'm very glad that all of you are full of hope for the future. When it comes to pressure, it is a serious problem in today's world.Students in our class are under too much pressure.Though some students study very hard, they are still poor in their studies.They often worry about their exams.Others think they have so much homework to do that they have no time to play. We should try to take some measures to deal with it.First, we can change our minds.Think about our favourite people or things instead of those troubles. Second, we can take part in more activities, such as the music club and the football team, which can relieve our anxiety and make us relaxed. Finally, we can find as many opportunities as possible to communicate with others,such as our parents, teachers and friends. As for me, I'm always under pressure, too.However, it doesn't matter.I think only by taking the above suggestions can we reduce our stress. That's all. Thank you! 【参考谚语】 1.A smile makes you ten years younger. 笑一笑 , 十年少。 2.Joy and sorrow are next-door neighbours. 悲喜常相伴。 3.Laughter is the best medicine. 笑是最好的药。 4.Worry kills more men than work. 忧虑比劳累更伤人。 拓展积累 【 相关短语 】 thanks for …因……感谢…… ; make new friends 结交新朋友 ; look after/take care of 照顾 ; keep in touch 保持联系 ; be friendly to 对……友好 ; bring back 带回 【亮点句型】 导入主题句 1.Among all my friends, Li Hua impressed me most. She is always kind and helpful. 2.My grandmother is the person who I want to thank most. She has helped me a lot. 3.The family is the greatest. No matter you are happy, painful or lost, it will gently on your way, quietly with your life. 4.There is sadness as well as happiness in our life so cherish what you have. 文章发展、过渡句 1.He encouraged me to be brave. He told me, “ You'd better speak slowly and clearly, and in this way, you can make yourself understood more easily. ” 2.As soon as she found out my problems, she talked with me and gave me some helpful advice. 3.With her encouragement, I have made great progress. 4.He held my hand tightly. In this way,I was not afraid any more. 5.He never scolds me.But I always listen to him and follow him. 文章结尾句 1.I really want to say “ Thank you for helping me. I love you! ” to my grandmother. 2.I will always remember her kindness and be grateful. 3.What he said and what he did will influence me all my life. A [2020 ·原创 ] 学会感恩 , 为自己已有的而感恩 , 感谢生活对你的赠予。请你以“ Learn to Be Thankful ”为题 , 写一篇英语短文。 [ 提示 ] （ 1 ） Someone ever helped me. （ 2 ） I helped someone. （ 3 ） I think … 实战演练 [ 要求 ] （ 1 ）短文结构完整 , 意思连贯 , 语言流畅 , 语法准确 , 符合逻辑 ; （ 2 ）文章必须包括所给的提示 , 可展开思路 , 适当发挥 ; （ 3 ）文章中不能出现真实的姓名、校名和其他真实信息 ; （ 4 ）词数 :80 左右（开头已给出 , 不计入总词数）。 [ 参考词汇 ] so … that; help each other; be full of Learn to Be Thankful I still remember       One possible version : Learn to Be Thankful I still remember a rainy day when I was in Grade 7. On that day, I overslept and hurried to school by bike. At a street corner I fell down and hurt my legs so badly that I couldn't move at all. A passer-by sent me to the hospital at once. I was so thankful that I decided to help others from then on. A few weeks later, on my way to school, I saw a blind man standing at a crossing. I helped him cross the street and showed him to the place he wanted to go to. It's important for us to learn to be thankful. If we can help each other, the world will be full of love. B [2019 ·石家庄模拟 ] 假如你是你们学校校报 Just Ask 栏目的编辑 Jane, 你刚刚收到李华同学的信件 , 她向你倾诉了心中的烦恼 , 希望你能为她提供有益的建议。请你根据下面提示 , 给她回信 , 提出合理建议。 [ 提示 ] （ 1 ） Why can't she make friends? （ 2 ） What should she do to solve the problem? [ 要求 ] （ 1 ）短文须包括所有提示内容 , 可适当发挥 ; （ 2 ）短文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名 ; （ 3 ）词数 :80 左右（开头和结尾已给出 , 不计入总词数）。 Dear Li Hua, You're a smart student, and that's good.        Jane One possible version : Dear Li Hua, You're a smart student, and that's good. However, can you remember what everybody said at school today? Probably not. And they can't, either.That's because you, like most people, don't open your heart to others. To overcome shyness and make friends, please open your heart. Be brave and invite your classmates to have lunch or play sports with you. Ask them what they did at the weekend or any other topics. In fact, what you talk about doesn't matter at all. The important thing is that you are on your way to making friends. Jane